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‘I want a cat’
In the children’s book, the second sentence starts on a
separate line below the first sentence, even though there was space for
approximately the first two words ‘when’ and ‘the’. This could be explained as
possibly separating them due to sentence being a new subject, with the new line
allowing the child to flow more fluently. As the first sentence can be defined
as a simple sentence, the second is a complex sentence, resulting in it being
longer, and considerably harder to read. The breakdown from the simple sentence
may allow the text visually easier to read, as it’s less congested.
Harry